The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and pie chart illustrate the employment status and earnings of Anthropology graduates five years after completing their degree.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the majority of Anthropology alumni secured full-time employment,
while
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part-time work and postgraduate study accounted for the smallest proportions. The table shows that freelance consultants earned significantly higher profits compared to the other two occupations. Regarding full-time work, more than half of the alumni were employed in
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category.
However
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, only 8% of students chose both part-time work and a master’s course, and
similarly
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, 8% of students focused solely on master’s studies during the same time frame. When it comes to income, over 80% of alumni working as freelance consultants earned more than $75,000.
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, 35% of those employed in private companies earned between $50,000 and $74,000.
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, the highest wages were in the
goverment
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government
sector, where 50% of workers earned over $100,000 five years later.
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