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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •give contact details for when you are away •give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

#friend #house #pet #holiday #•give #contact #instructions #care #household #duties
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Dear Neha, 
How'r
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How are
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 you doing? I have no words to thank you enough for being ready to take care of my pet and house during my
vocation
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vacation
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 period. During my absence, feel free to contact me anytime, I'd answer your calls immediately. I'm giving you my personal contact number and our home contact for calling in an emergency period. I'd be away from 6th July until 10th
july
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July
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. You'd be surprised after knowing the sensitive nature of the dog. My dog requires your full attention, care and love even when you go out for your groceries, walk and shopping please take her with you. Not only
this
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, she only eats a
besta
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best
 dog feed, so I would appreciate
if
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it if
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 you could
provider
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provide
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 her
that
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with that
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 during my absence.
Also
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, I trust you
,
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 and leave everything to you for other household chores still I'd like to tell you some which I'd appreciate if you
can
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could
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 do on
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a regualr
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regualr
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regular
 basis including
laundary
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laundry
, cleaning
of
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my backyard and checking my parcels and
mail box
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mailbox
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 letters. Again I'm very grateful to you for agreeing to look after
of
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my house and pet as I was really concerned about that. Yours Sincerely, Amanjot Kaur
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grammar
Revise the letter for minor grammatical inaccuracies and typos to improve clarity and professionalism.
structure
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance readability.
greeting
The greeting and closing are appropriate and contribute to a friendly tone.
tone
The writing tone is suitable for a letter to a friend, being both friendly and appreciative.
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