A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •give contact details for when you are away •give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

#friend #house #pet #holiday #•give #contact #instructions #care #household #duties

Dear Neha,

How'r

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you doing? I have no words to thank you enough for being ready to take care of my pet and house during my

vocation

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vacation

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period. During my absence, feel free to contact me anytime, I'd answer your calls immediately. I'm giving you my personal contact number and our home contact for calling in an emergency period. I'd be away from 6th July until 10th

july

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. You'd be surprised after knowing the sensitive nature of the dog. My dog requires your full attention, care and love even when you go out for your groceries, walk and shopping please take her with you. Not only

this

, she only eats a

besta

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best

dog feed, so I would appreciate

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you could

provider

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her

that

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during my absence.

Also

, I trust you

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and leave everything to you for other household chores still I'd like to tell you some which I'd appreciate if you

can

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do on

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regualr

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regular

basis including

laundary

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laundry

, cleaning

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my backyard and checking my parcels and

mail box

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letters. Again I'm very grateful to you for agreeing to look after

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my house and pet as I was really concerned about that. Yours Sincerely, Amanjot Kaur

Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on Tue Jul 02 2024

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greeting

The greeting and closing are appropriate and contribute to a friendly tone.

tone

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

198 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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