Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many
people
think that social media helps to make people
more valuable in society. It is completely agreed that social platforms make life easy and quicker, where they can make good relations with their near and dear all over the globe.
The main reason is that the social media is very convenient to communicate with friends and family members
. Another reason is that with these applications people
make groups and send and receive messages, in a few seconds and keep in touch with their families. For example
, if any patient needs blood due to
meet with an accident, the group members
immediately send text messages to their groups and get a response in a few minutes. For example
, people
can talk and do video calls with their relatives and friends all over the world in a few minutes and share information. As a result
, after the year 2000, the popularity of these websites increased dramatically in all countries.
The primary reason is that offices are using these inventions in their offices to send and receive emails, which saves time
and money. In addition
, companies are organising toolbox meetings online to save time
and use that time
for production. Moreover
, another factor is that group members
get information about their countries such
as news, crime reports and the latest developments. For instance
, companies hire staff members
from all over the world and control from their base offices. In contrast
, digital technologies reduce face-to-face interactions, where people
have fewer physical connections instead
virtual ones.
To conclude
, following the analysis of the topic, it is clear that
social platforms decreased physical attraction towards society, where peoples` behaviour changed these days, but to keep up-to-date in this
competitive world and their busy schedules, WhatsApp and Twitter are more beneficial to save time
and keeps in touch with more people
without visiting them.Submitted by rbtech65 on
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