The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018..

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The provided line graph gives information about the
number
of shop closures and openings in a particular area between 2011 and 2018
Overall
, there was a fluctuation in the
number
of closed and opened
stores
. The
number
of closed
shops
recorded a racket bottom in a specific.
To begin
with, the
number
of closed and open
stores
begin at about 6500 and 8500 respectively. The sections had a significant decrease in 2012 to reach 6000 closed
shops
and 4000 new
shops
. 2013 experienced a gradual increase in closures and opening of
shops
.
While
the new
stores
continued to increase at 6000, the closed
shops
decreased gradually to about 6500 in 2014.
Moreover
, in 2015 the
number
of
stores
which was closed hit the rocket button of 500 markets,
also
new
shops
experienced a sharp decrease to 4000
shops
. Both sections remain stable in 2016 and 2017.
However
, new
shops
had a drop in 2018
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.

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