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You have found an interesting website. Write a letter to your friend to tell about the website. In your letter, you should: •describe what the website is •explain why the website is interesting in •tell how this website will help him/her.

#website #friend #•describe #•explain #•tell
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Dear Neha, How're you doing? I'm writing
this
 letter to inform you that I came across an interesting
website
last
 week
while
 I was shopping online. The name of the
website
 is cambly.com and I found it when I was surfing on the internet for shopping. Actually, it is
a
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 online learning
website
 which is helping many students who are struggling to learn English and to make their dream come true for going abroad. You'd be surprised after knowing its amazing benefits
to
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not only for your personal life but
also
 it will assist you in your professional life. On a personal level, you'd develop your communication and language skills and on a professional
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 it may help you to get a better job after learning advanced
english
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.
This
website
 is
an
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amazing as you don't need to take any subscription for
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 two months as you'd be enjoying it
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free of cost. After considering all the advantages, I think
this
website
 will be very helpful to you. As you're planning to move
to
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abroad country,
therefore
, it can assist you
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professional and
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experienced teachers. Have you ever been to
this
 type of
website
 before? Again, I'd highly recommend you to go through
this
website
 in your free time. Best Wishes, Amanjot Kaur.
Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on

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task achievement
Try to provide more specific examples of how the website can help Neha besides just improving English skills, such as mentioning any features or tools the website offers.
coherence cohesion
The letter could benefit from a clearer logical structure by explicitly stating each point in separate paragraphs to improve readability.
task achievement
The letter successfully describes the website in detail and clearly explains why it is interesting.
task achievement
The tone is friendly and encouraging, which is well-suited for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used, making the letter feel warm and personal.
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