Advertising has become an unavoidable part of everyone's lives. Some people say that advertising is positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views include your opinion.

Advertisements

have become more popular because of their impact on businesses by enhancing their marketing.

Then

, many would argue that advertising promotions have impacted positively on humankind and they are necessary in order to promote the sales of cutting-edge designs.

Nevertheless

, I staunchly consider that those campaigns should be controlled and carefully managed. In

this

essay, I will explain my reasons in detail. To

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with, it is

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that advertising is a field that has reached high achievements because it improves the financial projections

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all

companies

by attracting more population to acquire their products.

As a consequence

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, nowadays, most

companies

are widely known, either nationally

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internationally.

Then

, all brands create more

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campaigns

campaign

in order to be more

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and popularize their products by using them,

such

as banners, flyers, online strategies, etc.

For instance

, since McDonalds have created most commercials showing their 'fresh' and 'high-quality' food, they have sold more than 6 billion

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dollars and their profits have rocketed up to uncharted levels.

Conversely

,

although

advertising

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campaigns

have many upsides in the economic field of most factories, there are some stumbling blocks that should be taken into consideration.

Firstly

, designers and

produces

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try to manipulate the content in all promotional messages in order to persuade people and catch their attention.

Secondly

, most

companies

have signed

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contracts

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with professionals who study people's

behivours

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behaviour

as well as

traits to focus their sales on a specific type of population.

Consequently

, people might make decisions about buying new products because of the content of the

advertisements

insted

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instead

of because they really need them.

For instance

, sociologist research

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proved that most pets'

advertisements

are related to a sentimental meaning in communities.

To sum up

, despite the fact

advertisements

are widely used and

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usage

have

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had a positive impact

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all

companies

, some features should be taken into account by evaluating their impact on societies and consumerism.