The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph below illustrates five distinct motions namely Film club, Martial arts, Amateur dramatics, Table tennis and Musical performances at a social centre in Australia from 2000 to 2020. Units are measured in numbers.
Overall
, it can be seen that the film club has always been the most prevalent activity since 2000. However
, the muscial
Correct your spelling
musical
performances
event was not built until the Change the noun form
performance
year
2005 and climbed gradually to 2020.
Looking through the chart, the film club was the number one activity chosed
by volunteers from about 62 people in 2000 to approximately 63 Correct your spelling
chosen
person
in the Change to a plural noun
people
year
2020. Similarly
, sports like table tennis stood with an unstable status where it started at nearly 18 individuals in 2000 and then
increased steadily to exactly 20 person
in 2010. After that, it jumped sharply and reached its peak at about 52 numbers of participants in 2020.
Change to a plural noun
people
By contrast
, the amateur dramatics starting at around 27 members in 2000 grew slightly and reached the highest number which is
29 in the Verb problem
,
year
2005. Dramatically, it went down heavily to lower than 10 person
in the Change to a plural noun
people
year
2020. In terms of martial arts, it withstood a fluctuate
during the whole given period, where it Replace the word
fluctuation
beginned
at approximately 34 and ended at the same number.Correct your spelling
beginning
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