The charts compare the proportion of male and female students in various age groups who were engaged in full-time and part-time education in Australia in 2006
The charts compare the proportion of male and female
students
in various age groups who were engaged in full-time and part-time Use synonyms
education
in Australia in 2006. Use synonyms
Overall
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students
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aged 30 and above in both genders.
Regarding the percentages of male and female Use synonyms
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studying part-time Use synonyms
education
in Australia, the highest percentage was seen among Use synonyms
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aged 20-24 participating in part-time Use synonyms
education
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students
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students
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categories
were made up fewer than 10%.
When it comes to proportions of male and female Use synonyms
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education
in Australia, the highest figure was seen among Use synonyms
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aged 20-24 attending full-time Use synonyms
education
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students
was 1% more than their male counterparts. Use synonyms
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Lastly
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categories
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