The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information represented in
chart
is about Add an article
the chart
a chart
UAE
government budget for Correct article usage
the UAE
year
2000. Change the article
the year
Overall
, the graph includes all government spendings
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
devided
into categories, Correct your spelling
divided
thus
it is not complicated to retrieve the data about each part as well as
the total.
The pie diagram consists of 10 pieces coloured different
, Change the word
differently
therefore
easy to understand what is
the magnitude of each section. Verb problem
apply
Additionally
, the title appear
inside or by the side for each part.
Clearly, the largest fee was Change the verb form
appears
spend
for social security, and for transport a few. The huge amount of money Change the form of the verb
spent
takes
health and personal social services, and education. Except Verb problem
is spent on
of
transport Change preposition
for
area
, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
the
law and order, and housing Correct article usage
apply
herritage
and environment Correct your spelling
heritage
doesn't
get a large part of Change the verb form
don't
budget
.
In conclusion, the round graph creates an Add an article
the budget
opportuninty
for quick and comfortable data usage and makes the provided set clear. Even without Correct your spelling
opportunity
numbers
it is fully understandable what remuneration which department has.Add a comma
numbers,
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