The charts show the expected changes in energy capacity in 2040 compared to 2015.

The charts show the expected changes in energy capacity in 2040 compared to 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts show the expected changes in energy capacity in 2040 compared to 2015.
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the
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of energy capacity from 2015 with projections to 2040. In the first chart, the
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of fossil
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fuels
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than any other
eneries
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energy
in 2015,accounting for 64%.
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solar was
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,constituting only 2%. The
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of fossil fuels was three times more than that of other renewables(23%). The
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for wind and nuclear tend to be fairly similar(5%,6%). In the next one, the
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of fossil fuels was most,at 44%,about half of
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in 2040. The
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of other renewable was
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a lot ,but 23% less than
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was followed by the
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of solar capacity(18%). That of nuclear was less than others,at 5%.
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,the
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of fossil flues ,nuclear and other
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renewables
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experienced a decrease from 2015 to 2040.
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, that of wind and solar kept an increase. In
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addition
,the figure for fossil fuels always constitutes the majority of the energy capacity.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • solar power
  • wind energy
  • hydroelectric power
  • technological advancements
  • government policies
  • environmental concerns
  • resource depletion
  • sustainable energy
  • nuclear energy
  • safety protocols
  • regional variations
  • economic development
  • resource availability
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • pollution
  • job creation
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