The diagrams bellow show the Porth Harbour in 2000 and current

The diagrams bellow show the Porth Harbour in 2000 and current
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams bellow show the Porth Harbour in 2000 and current
The
two
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pictures compare Porth Harbour’s design and facilities in 2000 with the current design. Looking from an
overall
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perspective,
it is clear that
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the harbour has become more accessible by adding a new dock option.
Also
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, the big
castle
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at the south of the map, which was unused, has been granted to a private section. There were
two
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parking on the western of the harbour in 2000,
while
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these
two
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remained the same as before, the path to the road in the southern parking changed. In the southern section of the harbour, there was a
castle
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which was unused, and close to
this
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castle
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, there was a beach for the public. Now,
instead
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of the
castle
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, there is a hotel, and the public could not use the beach, because the beach was
also
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granted to that hotel. At the eastern part of the showers and toilets, there was a marina for private yachts, and in the immediate south, an area for fishing boats was located. Currently, the locations of these
two
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places are changed with each other. By looking at the southern part of the map, we could see a couple of cafes and shops established close to the road.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, castle with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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