The table below shows how many students of a school in UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features, comparisons where relevant.

#students #school #uk #part #four #sports #summarise #information #features #comparisons

The line graph compares pupils from

a schools

Correct the article-noun agreement

schools

a school

show examples

in the UK, who had participated in four various sports namely running, basketball, swimming, and

football

in 2001 and 2011.

Overall

, participation in running

and

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

football

, and swimming increased,

while

participation in running had dropped to the lowest

participated

Replace the word

participation

show examples

category. All categories had seen heavy fluctuations,

football

accounted

Change preposition

for 60

show examples

% right before reaching

Change preposition

apply

show examples

70% in 2002. In subsequent years,

football

followed

same

Add an article

the same

show examples

pattern and accounted65% in 2007 and

then

gradually increased to 70% right before

small

Add an article

a small

the small

show examples

dip in 2011 which was around 69%.

Submitted by prajapativishal9328 on Wed Jul 03 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words football with synonyms.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

91 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

Topic Vocabulary:

participation rate
trend
increase/decrease
year-on-year comparison
peak
lowest point
gender distribution
new entrants
drop in participation
continuation/discontinuation

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it
I am writing this letter to request you to please transfer me to the head office of our company which is located in England for about six months as it would be a new learning experience for me.
6.5
band
Cramming and immersion are becomingly increasingly recognised methods of gaining knowledge in an area, other people disagree and say that only through lifelong learning can a subject be learnt. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Although cramming and immersion have earned a reputation as favored and commonplace study methods, some individuals take a different perspective by arguing that long-term learning is the best learning strategy to comprehend a particular subject. Personally, I partially concur with this opinion on the grounds that the leverage of long-lasting recall and immersive and intensive learning can be in students' favor.
5.5
band
Some people think that language should be taught in small classes, while other people think the number of students in a language class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 5.0
People have different views on whatever class sizes matter for language courses. While some argue that large classes can allow teachers to focus more on providing quality content, I believe that teaching in small groups can cater to the individual needs of each student.
4.5
band
In many countries around the world,rural people are moving to citites so that population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a possitive or a negative development?
It is stated that in most of the nations around the globe, individuals from countryside are migrating to city areas then the total amount of people living there is reducing. This kind of movements impact on sustainability of a particular country and the wellbeing of remained villagers. In my opinion, I believe that it is not beneficial in many perspectives.
7.5
band
Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?
Some people think that over the past 30 years, car ownership has risen so speedily that many cities globally are now "one big traffic congestion." In this essay, I will rate the authenticity of this demonstration and suggest solutions for governments for this issue.

The table below shows how many students of a school in UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features, comparisons where relevant.

Cramming and immersion are becomingly increasingly recognised methods of gaining knowledge in an area, other people disagree and say that only through lifelong learning can a subject be learnt. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Some people think that language should be taught in small classes, while other people think the number of students in a language class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 5.0

In many countries around the world,rural people are moving to citites so that population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a possitive or a negative development?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?