The table below shows how many students of a school in UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011. Summarise information by selecting and reporting the main features, comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares pupils from
a schools
in the UK, who had participated in four various sports namely running, basketball, swimming, and Correct the article-noun agreement
schools
a school
football
in 2001 and 2011.
Overall
, participation in running and
Correct word choice
apply
football
, and swimming increased, while
participation in running had dropped to the lowest participated
category.
All categories had seen heavy fluctuations, Replace the word
participation
football
accounted 60
% right before reaching Change preposition
for 60
to
70% in 2002. In subsequent years, Change preposition
apply
football
followed same
pattern and accounted65% in 2007 and Add an article
the same
then
gradually increased to 70% right before small
dip in 2011 which was around 69%.Add an article
a small
the small
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Vocabulary: Replace the words football with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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