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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided line graph gives information about the proportion of imported countries, including
China
,
India
, Japan and the United States of America from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that the Japanese were the most popular customers who imported at the beginning of the years.
However
,
Chinese
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 were the highest common clients
at the end
 of the year. Indians continued to be the lowest people who bought from Australia over the period of time.
To begin
 with,
India
 and
China
, where the least two countries listed. In 1990 began at about three per cent and two per cent respectively.
India
 remained stable at around three per cent until 2000,
while
China
 increased gradually to 5%. Indians and Chinese continued to rise significantly at about 7% and 25% respectively. Meanwhile,
India
 reached the rocket bottom at 5% ,
China
 hit a peak of approximately 27%.
On the other hand
, the rate of Australian exports to America fluctuation from 1990 to 2012 from about 11% to 7%. Even though
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 the percentage of exported products was the high ranking in Japan in 1990 at nearly 26%, it witnessed a dramatic decline until 2012 to almost 18 percentage
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