THE graph bolow givas information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph demonstrates data about the it had a significant increase until 2010 with about 44
number
of global travellers in particular
countries, including Brazil, Egypt, Malaysia, France, and the USA from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the rate of tourists arriving in the whole area had
increased. The United States of America was the most common country in the Wrong verb form
has
number
of commuters. Meanwhile, Brazil and Egypt were the least popular regions for travellers.
To begin
with, America witnessed the highest number
of international travelling from 1995 to 2005 with 72 million
tourists to approximately 85 million
people. while
it witnessed a gradual decrease from 2006 to 2010 which was around 18 million
persons. In addition
, the number
of global tourists in France beginbegan
at nearly 30,000,000 , it had a dramatic increase and hit a peak in 2010 at about 80 Correct your spelling
began
million
.
Furthermore
, at almost 24,000,000 in 1995Add a comma
,
million
individuals. While
Brazil and Egypt were the lowest visiting among the countries they experienced a sharp price until 2010.Submitted by fatmahaleesa on
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