Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In my opinion, to agree or disagree with the
statement
that learning to speak a single for
children
is a critical issue.
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, I will present some
argument
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supporting
this
statement
,after which aspects against that will be discussed. In
this
essay,the two
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will be argued. On the one hand, many humans believe that
children
should learn to speak a single has many benefits. The most important is to improve the information to communicate.
For example
, I was learning more skills to assist other
people
in the country.
Moreover
, speaking a single is essential for physical, psychological, and financial aspects.
For instance
, for the mind, if we learn
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new language to speak, we will get strong a personality.
Furthermore
, they receive a lot of experience in speaking a single with other
people
in
a different cities
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. As an example,
children
depending themselves for work.
On the other hand
,other
people
oppose
this
statement
for many reasons. The most important is that
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a universal language difficult. One more reason to disagree with the
statement
is that speaking the universal language for
children
was awful. The best example,I like what I speak because to teach and contact other
people
in many cities. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea supporting
this
statement
because its drawbacks outweigh its benefits.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • fluently
  • native language
  • effective communication
  • global understanding
  • unity
  • educational opportunities
  • career opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • social integration
  • language barriers
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