You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The presented table compares data about the

the

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number of international travel in 4 different years( 1990,1995,2000, and 2005) in 5 various districts per million.

Overall

, The figure of people who had international travel increased;

moreover

, all regions except America had

rose

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a rose

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trend in the

periodic

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period

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of 15 years.

According to

the chart, America, which was the first one in 1990, had a 680.5, but the trend reduced significantly to 113.2 in the

last

year. The second one was

who

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European

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Europeans

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that

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had 280.2 at the beginning;

then

this

number climbed moderately to 400.2 in 2005;

furthermore

,

catched

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caught

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on the first level. The third one was Asia and the

pacific

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Pacific

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, which had the largest society, at the

beginng

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beginning

had 60.2, and

this

amount

had

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incresed

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increased

owervelmingly

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overwhelmingly

to 135 in 2005. The diagram demonstrates Africa and

Middle

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West respectively had not only the smallest figure but

also

grew

up

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slightly because

in

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the start Africa had 18.2.

Finally

,

this

amount reached 28.7.

In addition

, the number of Middle West nearly the

helf

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half

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of the figure of

the

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Africa.