Tha charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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dinner and snacks consist of the same point 14%. But lunch involved 29% of these nutrients in the USA. The second chart shows the point of Correct word choice
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large amount of sugar, 42%, is attached to snacks. Dinner included 23%, lunch and breakfast collected 19%, and 16% respectively.
All in all, the diagrams show that every typical meal consumed in the USA contains a percentage of at least 14% of nutrients that can be unhealthy if eaten too much.Linking Words
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