The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The two pictures above depict the comparison in Nelson
city
from different times which is 2000 and today.
On the first map, there are few
sites, Correct article usage
a few
such
as old
Correct article usage
an old
market
, train station, university and trees. Nowadays, the
Nelson Correct article usage
apply
city
has been developed with many buildings and some of them Capitalize word
City
got
rebuilt. The new buildings like Wrong verb form
have been
residence
, shopping Fix the agreement mistake
residences
centre
, new covered market
, bars and clubs, restarurant
, and new Correct your spelling
restaurants
restaurant
shop
have been constructed.
Not only that, the Fix the agreement mistake
shops
city
centre
has facilitated with four bycycles
to Correct your spelling
bicycles
used
. People can use it by rent systems. Wrong verb form
use
Moreover
, the road is only for pedestrians. Afterwards, the restaurant
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
also
the bars and clubs are located at
Change preposition
on
left
and right Add an article
the left
the
port. Unfortunately, the trees are not available anymore.
Change preposition
of the
In other words
, a significant change has been made by build
new places. Change the verb form
building
Furthermore
, some places got
relocated. Beforehand, the train station and old Verb problem
were
market
are at
the left side. Now, the old Change preposition
on
market
changed at
the right side of Change preposition
to
city
Add an article
the city
centre
and train
station Correct article usage
the train
at
the north of Change preposition
to
city
Correct article usage
the city
centre
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, market, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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