The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The map illustrates 2 locations in which it is possible to build a new
school
in Canterbury.
Overall
,what stands out from
this
map is that Canterbury has become far more developed and modern, with a new
school
which has been planned to be built. Looking at the details, a new
school
S1 which is located in the northeast where takes 5km to sturry. Another interesting point
,
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is in the north of Canterbury where you will find a university between the s1 and the university there is Maine Rodes. To turn to a second
school
which is located in the town centre in the residential area will take us around 7km to Chartham.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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