The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph illustrates the export proportion of Australia with four different nations between 1990 and 2012. In general, the rates of two countries including
Japan
, and the US tended to decrease,
while
China
's and
India
's proportions witnessed an increase over time. Having looked at the given picture for more details, in 1990,
Japan
's was at 26%, more than the US's rate by 10%. Meanwhile, the two percentages of
China
and
India
were under 5%. After 5 years, both figures for
Japan
and the US sharply decreased to 20% and 9%, respectively. In 2000, three
China
's, the US's, and
India
's proportions grew, among that the percentage of
Japan
had a drop. In 2005, the rate of
China
rocketed before reaching 30% in 2012.
Besides
, the figure for
India
rose to 7% in 2010
then
slightly falling.
By contrast
,
Japan
's and
India
's figures continued to go down to 17% and 6%, respectively in 2012.
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