The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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The line graph illustrates the export proportion of Australia with four different nations between 1990 and 2012. In general, the rates of two countries including
Japan
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, and the US tended to decrease,
while
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China
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's and
India
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's proportions witnessed an increase over time. Having looked at the given picture for more details, in 1990,
Japan
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's was at 26%, more than the US's rate by 10%. Meanwhile, the two percentages of
China
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and
India
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were under 5%. After 5 years, both figures for
Japan
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and the US sharply decreased to 20% and 9%, respectively. In 2000, three
China
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's, the US's, and
India
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's proportions grew, among that the percentage of
Japan
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had a drop. In 2005, the rate of
China
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rocketed before reaching 30% in 2012.
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, the figure for
India
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rose to 7% in 2010
then
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slightly falling.
By contrast
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,
Japan
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's and
India
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's figures continued to go down to 17% and 6%, respectively in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, china, india with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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