The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of gorillas in the wild between 1990 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of gorillas in the wild between 1990 and 2015. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the changes in the
population
of
gorillas
held outside captivity in seven African countries from 1990 to 2015.
Overall
, all seven countries experienced a downtrend in the number of
gorillas
in the wild.
However
, Uganda saw a considerable drop in their gorilla
population
,
while
Nigeria and Angola showed a slight increase throughout the period. Uganda saw the biggest drop in the
population
of wild
gorillas
from around 8,000 in 1990 to 7,500 in 2015.
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African Republic, their
population
declined from about 6,000 in 1990 to less than 5,000 in 2015. Nigeria and Angola saw a slight rise in the number of untamed
gorillas
. The figure rose from approximately 2,500 to nearly 2,600 which was an increase of 100
gorillas
.
In addition
,
this
trend was similar for Angola which experienced a small increase of about 90 wild
gorillas
at the end
of 2015.
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