Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Part 1 task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, Do not give your opinion, just the facts. and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
Nowadays,
people
prefer a fast and more convenient lifestyle, mostly due to
their work requirements. This
bar chart proves that working or other external factors can have a big impact on how people
prefer their living methods. It clearly shows the significant shifts in homeownership and renting trends among people
aged 25-34 in the UK between 2004 and 2014. Notably, the percentage
of homeowners
decreased while
the percentage
of renters
increased.
Over the decade, the rate
of homeowners
among communities aged 25-34 decreased while
the percentage
of renters
increased. This
shift was so significant that by the end of the period, renters
had surpassed homeowners
.
The homeownership rate
was approximately 58% in 2004, which was about 30% higher than the rate
for renters
. This
percentage
dipped slightly to about 56% in 2006 but then
increased to 57% in 2007. Over time, the rate
later dropped significantly to almost 52% in 2011 and remained almost the same in 2012. Sooner or later, it continued to decline steadily to about 36% by the end of the period.
In 2004, about 20% of people
were renting, and this
increased to around 33% in 2005 before remaining consistent in 2006. , over the next five years, the figure experienced significant steady growth, reaching around 41% in 2011. It remained stable in 2012 and then
surged to 47% in 2014, surpassing the rate
of homeowners
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, percentage, homeowners, renters, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 4 times.
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