Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Part 1 task. The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, Do not give your opinion, just the facts. and make comparisons where relevant.
Nowadays,
people
prefer a fast and more convenient lifestyle, mostly Use synonyms
due to
their work requirements. Linking Words
This
bar chart proves that working or other external factors can have a big impact on how Linking Words
people
prefer their living methods. It clearly shows the significant shifts in homeownership and renting trends among Use synonyms
people
aged 25-34 in the UK between 2004 and 2014. Notably, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
homeowners
decreased Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
renters
increased.
Over the decade, the Use synonyms
rate
of Use synonyms
homeowners
among communities aged 25-34 decreased Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
renters
increased. Use synonyms
This
shift was so significant that by the end of the period, Linking Words
renters
had surpassed Use synonyms
homeowners
.
The homeownership Use synonyms
rate
was approximately 58% in 2004, which was about 30% higher than the Use synonyms
rate
for Use synonyms
renters
. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
percentage
dipped slightly to about 56% in 2006 but Use synonyms
then
increased to 57% in 2007. Over time, the Linking Words
rate
later dropped significantly to almost 52% in 2011 and remained almost the same in 2012. Sooner or later, it continued to decline steadily to about 36% by the end of the period.
In 2004, about 20% of Use synonyms
people
were renting, and Use synonyms
this
increased to around 33% in 2005 before remaining consistent in 2006. , over the next five years, the figure experienced significant steady growth, reaching around 41% in 2011. It remained stable in 2012 and Linking Words
then
surged to 47% in 2014, surpassing the Linking Words
rate
of Use synonyms
homeowners
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, percentage, homeowners, renters, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 4 times.
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