The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
The pie
chart
provides a breakdown of the venues where dance
classes
are held, while
the bar chart
illustrates the three types of dance
classes
attended by young individuals in a specific Australian town.
Overall
, it is clear that
private studio has the highest percentage. It can be seen that, in ballet and tap dance
classes
, the number of under 11 members are
more than the group between 11 Correct subject-verb agreement
is
andin
a town in Australia are currently attending.
Looking at the pie Correct your spelling
and
and in
chart
, the
private Correct article usage
apply
studio
make up nearly 50% which is the highest data.Fix the agreement mistake
studios
While
nearly one-fifth of dance
classes
take place in community halls and other locations, college-based studios are the least chosen location, comprising only one-tenth of the total.
Looking at the bar chart
, there are approximately 300 paticipants
who Correct your spelling
participants
under
11 in ballet Add a missing verb
are under
dance
classes
which is a
half Correct article usage
apply
compare
with the members who Change the form of the verb
compared
from
11 to 16 years old in Add a missing verb
are from
same
Correct article usage
the same
classes
. A similar pattern is observed in the numbers of these two age cohorts opting for tap dancing, albeit less pronounced, with approximately 450 younger students
compared to 420 older students
. This
contrasts starkly with modern dance
classes
, where just over 500 students
in the 11-16 age group participate, compared to only 300 younger students
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