The line graph illustrates the participation of countrywide athletes in the Winter Olympic Games from 1988 to 2004.
The line graph illustrates the participation of countrywide athletes in the Winter Olympic Games from 1988 to 2004.
In general, it is evident that the number of Summer Olympians was the greatest
at the end
of the period, while
the number of Winter Olympians experienced a dramatic decline despite an
initial growth.
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According to
the line graph, there were 6 million
participants who engaged in the 1988 Winter Olympics and this
figure reached a peak of 8 million
in 1992 before plummeting by 5 million
8 years later. Then
, it witnessed a gradual fall to only 2 million
in 2004.
As regards the pie chart, the 2004 Olympics recorded the highest number of participants, at 9 million
. Meanwhile, the years 2000 and 1988 had the second-highest (7 million
) and third-highest (5 million
) attendance levels, respectively. By contrast
, there were significantly fewer competitors in 1996 and 1992, with the former figure being 3 million
compared to only 2 million
of the latter.Submitted by weezel on
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