The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of United States
households
categorising by their yearly earnings in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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Overall
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households
that had an income in the range of $75,000-$99,999 or more were the least across three years, followed by the group of $50,000-$74,999 and less than $25,000 respectively, Use synonyms
whereas
the top three highest groups varied among years.
In 2007 and 2015, people whose annual income was $100,000 or more ranked the biggest proportion in the nation. Linking Words
However
, the difference between these years was the gap between the second group Linking Words
of
earning $25,000-$49,000. Change preposition
apply
While
the gap in 2015 was approximately 5 Linking Words
millions
Change to singular
million
households
, that of 2007 was merely 2 Use synonyms
millions
.
Families who yielded $25,000-$49,000 in 2011 were the mainstream segment, Change to singular
million
while
$100,000 or more was in the following place. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, the difference was the smallest at 1 million Linking Words
households
between the two ranges.Use synonyms
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