The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts provide details about shopping online for
electronics
, home furnishings, video games, food and beverages in the years 2005 and 2010. Units are measured in percentages.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the highest online Linking Words
sales
were for Use synonyms
electronics
and appliances, Use synonyms
while
the lowest was for video games, but it increased towards the end of the year. Despite Linking Words
this
, home furnishings experienced a downtrend in Linking Words
sales
.
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Initially
, the Linking Words
sales
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electronics
and appliances were the most popular accounting for more than one-third of expenditure, but Use synonyms
this
figure declined to 30%. Linking Words
However
, the least popular online shopping in 2005 was for video games. The percentage of Linking Words
sales
was 18% before it rose to 23% in 2010.
The proportion of Use synonyms
sales
for home furnishings stood at about one-quarter in 2005 before it decreased to 15% in 2010. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
sales
of food and beverages surpassed Use synonyms
electronics
and appliances by the end of 2010 which was an increase of 10%.Use synonyms
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