The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph charts here illustrate the portion of
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the house
house
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houses
used
appliances Correct pronoun usage
that used
such
as washing Linking Words
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vaccume
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vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
in contrast
to the total Linking Words
hour
spent in a week for chores in one country in the span of 99 years from 1920 to 2019.
The use of Fix the agreement mistake
hours
refrigerator
was virtually zero prior to 1920, Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
however
, from 1920 to 1960 almost 90% Linking Words
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of house
house
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houses
acquered
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acquired
refrigerator
and in the next two Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
decade
it reached 100% and it continued to be at that mark till 2019. Fix the agreement mistake
decades
Incase
of Correct your spelling
In the case
vaccume
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vacuum
cleaner
, 30% Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
houses
already had them, but Change preposition
of houses
its
use experienced a sharp rise and by 2000, it reached Correct pronoun usage
their
100
% mark, which remained till 2019. In comparison, almost 40% Correct article usage
the 100
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of household
household
had washing Fix the agreement mistake
households
machine
by the start of the graph, it continued to grow to 70% by 1960. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
However
, from 1960 to 1980, its Linking Words
usages
dropped a bit. In the later Fix the agreement mistake
usage
years
it regained its place in the house to around 60%Add a comma
years,
,
and stayed at that Remove the comma
apply
upto
2019.
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up to
On the other hand
, people used to spend 50 hours a week Linking Words
to do
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doing
houseworks
. It sharply declined to 20 hours by 1960, followed by Correct your spelling
housework
gradual
decrease to around 10 hours by 2019.
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a gradual
To sum up
, the use of electrical Linking Words
appliance
experienced Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
upward
trend in all Add an article
an upward
category
, where the the amount of time Fix the agreement mistake
categories
went
Verb problem
spent
for
housework followed a downward trend.Change preposition
on
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