The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart depicts the top ten countries for the making and using of electricity in 2014. Generally speaking,
it is clear that
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China
has the highest rate and took the lead in Use synonyms
both
fields, followed by the United States which took second Use synonyms
place
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While
the lowest in Linking Words
both
production and consumption is Korea. Rep.
At first glance, Use synonyms
China
was the leading country in Use synonyms
both
categories, with 5,398 Use synonyms
billion
kWh made and 5,322 Use synonyms
billion
usages. Following Use synonyms
China
, the United States placed 2nd Use synonyms
place
with up to 4000 Use synonyms
billion
in Use synonyms
both
producing and consuming electricity . Next up was Russia in 3rd Use synonyms
place
, with just around 1000 Use synonyms
billion
in Use synonyms
both
categories. Continuingly Japan and India, do not differ much in numbers of production and usage. Use synonyms
Likewise
, the other countries from 6th Linking Words
place
, which Use synonyms
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Canada to the Unnecessary verb
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last
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place
, Korea, Use synonyms
Rep
are not much of Correct word choice
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a
different in close comparison.
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To sum up
, two of the countries, Linking Words
China
and the US are the main producers Use synonyms
as well as
consumers of electricity. Linking Words
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Also
Russia at 3rd Add a comma
Also,
place
and KoreaUse synonyms
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place
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