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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart depicts the top ten countries for the making and using of electricity in 2014. Generally speaking,
it is clear that
China
 has the highest rate and took the lead in
both
 fields, followed by the United States which took second
place
.
While
 the lowest in
both
 production and consumption is Korea. Rep. At first glance,
China
 was the leading country in
both
 categories, with 5,398
billion
 kWh made and 5,322
billion
 usages. Following
China
, the United States placed 2nd
place
 with up to 4000
billion
 in
both
 producing and consuming electricity . Next up was Russia in 3rd
place
, with just around 1000
billion
 in
both
 categories. Continuingly Japan and India, do not differ much in numbers of production and usage.
Likewise
, the other countries from 6th
place
, which
is
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Canada to the
last
place
, Korea,
Rep
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 are not much of
a
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different in close comparison.
To sum up
, two of the countries,
China
 and the US are the main producers
as well as
 consumers of electricity.
Also
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 Russia at 3rd
place
 and Korea
,
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 is in 10th
place
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, both, place, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • measured in gigawatt-hours (GWh)
  • top ten countries
  • discrepancy
  • consumption levels
  • production levels
  • leading producers
  • leading consumers
  • notable differences
  • account for
  • rank
  • close behind
  • marginally higher
  • significant gap
  • roughly equal
  • substantially more
  • significantly less
  • outstrip
  • conversely
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