The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now,and plans for its developement. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below
illustrates
the current view of the little town centre Change the verb form
illustrate
Use synonyms
Islip
,and its Change preposition
of Islip
likable
modification in future.
The Change the spelling
likeable
down town
of Correct your spelling
downtown
Islip
will be essentially changed by constructing extra shopping,transport and residential facilities.
As it is shown in the plan ,there are two Use synonyms
shops
opposite each other by Use synonyms
main
Change the article
the main
road
. A big space is under the housing. Having Use synonyms
devided
into two side roads ,the main Correct your spelling
divided
decided
road
extends to the school in the West and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
park
in the East. Correct article usage
the park
Contryside
occupies the whole empty room beside the Correct your spelling
Countryside
shops
. Use synonyms
Currently
Add a comma
Currently,
Islip
main plot is not busy enough and comfortable for car travelling.
Use synonyms
Contraversary
to Correct your spelling
Controversy
plain
plan of Add an article
the plain
a plain
Islip
nowadays ,Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
further
planned development is crucial . One main Linking Words
road
will be replaced by Use synonyms
the
dual carriageway for better linking all the necessary facilities . Correct article usage
a
Main
Change the article
The main
road
will be replaced by Use synonyms
pedestrian
Correct article usage
a pedestrian
road
Use synonyms
whish
allows common people easily Correct your spelling
which
reaching
the Wrong verb form
reach
newshopping
centres ,bus station ,car Correct your spelling
new shopping
park
and new housing in the North and previously Use synonyms
existed
Wrong verb form
existing
shops
in the South.Use synonyms
Due to
Linking Words
constructing
of a new motorway the size of existed Replace the word
construction
park
will be diminished , Use synonyms
as well as
Linking Words
Correct article usage
the coutryside
coutryside
will be eliminated. New housing will appear next to Correct your spelling
countryside
Use synonyms
park
and opposite the Correct article usage
the park
shops
in the North.
Ne new modifications will bring more benefits,Use synonyms
attract
many new residents Correct word choice
and attract
due to
all Linking Words
new
centresCorrect article usage
the new
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