The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.

The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
The bar diagram compares the ages of females at the time of delivering their firstborns in the
years
1966, 1986 and 2006 in Australia. It is immediately apparent that the ages of
first
delivery increased with advancing
years
. Comparatively, the ages at
first
-time deliveries for 20-
24
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year
old females and teenagers decreased over the period.
Whereas
most
first
deliveries occurred amongst 20-
24
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24-year-old
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year
old ladies at a little over 60% in 1966, the age at
first
teenage delivery was approximately 35%.
Meanwhile
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in 2006, these figures fell to just below half and a third of the aforementioned age groups respectively.
By contrast
, women aged 35-39
years
observed a rise in their initial births where the recorded 12% in 1966
quadripled
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quadrupled
in the
year
2006.
However
, there were fluctuations in the 25-29
year
old women's age of giving birth to their
first borns
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as nearly 40% was witnessed in 1966.
This
figure increased by just more than 10% and by 10% in 1986 and 2006 respectively. Notably, very few ladies 40
years
and greater achieved motherhood in all 3
years
, occurring at about 5% or less.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic changes
  • first-time mothers
  • age bracket
  • fertility rate
  • childbearing age
  • socioeconomic factors
  • educational attainment
  • healthcare advancements
  • family planning
  • societal norms
  • trend analysis
  • delaying motherhood
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