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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005.
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The line graph depicts the four main origins of
air
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pollution
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 in the UK from 1990 to 2005, with units given in
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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, most sources of
air
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pollution
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 witnessed a decline, except those caused by transportation, which remained relatively stable throughout the period.
Initially
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, total
air
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pollution
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 was at a peak of approximately 7
million
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tonnes
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.
This
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 figure plummeted by about 3
million
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tonnes
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 by 1999,
then
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 levelled off for three years before falling slightly to around 2
million
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tonnes
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 by the end of the year.
Similarly
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, industrial
air
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pollution
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 started at just under 6
million
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tonnes
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 and declined significantly to less than half its initial value 15 years later.
On the other hand
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,
air
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pollution
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 from transport and households was the least in 1990, both constituting around 1
million
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tonnes
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.
However
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,
while
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 transport-related
pollution
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 remained steady throughout the period,
air
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pollution
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 from households was almost eradicated by the latter year.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollution, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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