These
,
people
's buying capacity has been increasing tremendously than ever before.
However
, many
people
say that an overdose of
sugar
is being
onChange preposition
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food and drinks
products
by
largeChange the article
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number of
manufacturesCorrect your spelling
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, henceforth, increasing the
price
of
sugar
-based
on Change preposition
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the Correct article usage
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products
that Correct pronoun usage
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can lead to reducing of
consume Verb problem
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sugar
levels.
Hence
, I partially agree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with,
sugar
products
should be made more expensive because many
products
containsChange the verb form
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more
sugar
levels, so when the
price
is peek
while Correct word choice
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the population might
be consumedWrong verb form
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very less
level
of
sugarsFix the agreement mistake
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in order to they can stay far away from many deadly diseases like diabetes.
This
is, increasing the
price
of tax on sugary
stuffsChange the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
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that mankind
doCorrect subject-verb agreement
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not purchase enormous
level
, and
as a result
, they are being healthy.
For example
,
to
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recent survey said that, increasing
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level
2
diabeticsReplace the word
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in day-to-day around the world
due to
people
areVerb problem
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theCorrect article usage
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sweet tooth and they cannot ignore
to Change preposition
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eating more sweets
such
as
. Needless to say
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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,
to
people
buy less
sugar
that'sVerb problem
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the only way to
increasingWrong verb form
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the tax on sugary-based
on Change preposition
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products
besides
the population never
stopCorrect subject-verb agreement
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to intake that.
In contrast
, there is another way to reduce the intake
level
of
sugar-basedCorrect your spelling
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on
stuffsChange the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
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instead
of increasing the taxes on that
products
which is
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awareness should be arranged by the authorities about how
overdoseAdd an article
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of
sugar
products
affectCorrect subject-verb agreement
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people
's lives and what
are Unnecessary verb
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diseases will
bringsChange the verb form
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.
This
is, conducting small
in the countryside along with towns
in Change preposition
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every weekend meanwhile the local authorities and the
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videos.
For instance
,
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India has been
conducting trhVerb problem
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towards
people
to buy
lessCorrect quantifier usage
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products
in order to
they Correct pronoun usage
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have the minimum number of
sugar
patients as compared to around the world.
In addition
,
residents to do
activities to improve their well-being from
diabetes
also
prevention
increasing the cost
onChange preposition
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sugar
-based
on Change preposition
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stuffsChange the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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.
In conclusion, certainly, increasing the cost of
sugar
-based
on Change preposition
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stuffsChange the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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can reduce the consumption of sugary items in order to humankind
stay Verb problem
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far away from
diabeticReplace the word
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. Even though, creating
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of
sugar
-based
product'sFix the agreement mistake
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negative consequences through campaigns
as well as
to do
activities to the population can lead to avoiding
diabeticsChange the noun form
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diseases
raterCorrect your spelling
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than increasing the
price
of
sugar
items.
Therefore
, I partially agree with
this
statement in the
details.