The diagrams below show a small local museum and it sorroundings in 1957 and 2007 summarize the information by selecting main features

The diagrams below show a small local museum and it sorroundings in 1957 and 2007 summarize the information by selecting main features
The two pictures describe the transformation of a mini local
museum
and its surroundings over 50 years, from 1957 to 2007.
Overall
, significant developments were made to enlarge and relocate several rooms within the
museum
building and reduce the green area around it.
To begin
, in 1957, the garden area of the
museum
was quite large, with various types of trees planted around the building.
However
, by 2007, the owners decided to redesign the green space, reducing the number of trees in front of the way and behind the library. The main road, located to the south, originally connected to a small roadway leading to the
museum
.
This
small road was later demolished, and a car park was constructed near the gallery.
Moreover
, in 2007, the owner renovated the mini gallery, adding several functional rooms to meet the needs of visitors. The new additions included a
museum
shop, a reception room, a car park, a café, an educational
center
Change the spelling
centre
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, and a special exhibition area. The local history room was retained but was expanded to a larger size.
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