The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line charts provide information about the
percentage
of households owning a washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner and the
number
of
hours
spent doing household
chores
per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the
number
of households with a refrigerator and vacuum cleaner was the highest by the end of the period
while
the lowest
percentage
was for washing machines. Despite
this
, the
number
of
hours
spent on household
chores
declined dramatically by the end of the year. From 1920 to 1980, the
number
of people with a vacuum cleaner increased from 30% to 60% and
this
continued to increase until 2000, reaching 100%. A similar trend was
also
seen with the ownership of refrigerators. There was a 90% increase in the
percentage
of people having a refrigerator between 1920 and 1960 and
this
continued to increase to 100% in 2000.
However
, the
percentage
of people who had a washing machine by the end of 2019 was the lowest figure of just about 60%. In 1920, the
number
of
hours
spent on household
chores
was 50
hours
and
this
figure declined by 30
hours
in 1960.
However
, the
number
of
hours
spent on doing
chores
remained stable from 1980 to 2019.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, number, hours, chores with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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