The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line charts provide information about the
percentage
of households owning a washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner and the number
of hours
spent doing household chores
per week in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the number
of households with a refrigerator and vacuum cleaner was the highest by the end of the period while
the lowest percentage
was for washing machines. Despite this
, the number
of hours
spent on household chores
declined dramatically by the end of the year.
From 1920 to 1980, the number
of people with a vacuum cleaner increased from 30% to 60% and this
continued to increase until 2000, reaching 100%. A similar trend was also
seen with the ownership of refrigerators. There was a 90% increase in the percentage
of people having a refrigerator between 1920 and 1960 and this
continued to increase to 100% in 2000. However
, the percentage
of people who had a washing machine by the end of 2019 was the lowest figure of just about 60%.
In 1920, the number
of hours
spent on household chores
was 50 hours
and this
figure declined by 30 hours
in 1960. However
, the number
of hours
spent on doing chores
remained stable from 1980 to 2019.Submitted by mraha409 on
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