The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
The pie chart and table compare the different nationalities in Australia in terms of the
proportion
of population
and areas where they live.
Overall
, Australians
have the largest proportion
and the least proportion
belongs to the Dutch
. Additionally
, most Chinese
live in the city
and most people
in countryside
are Australian.
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the countryside
According to
the pie chart, Australians
have the largest proportion
, representing 77% of the total population
. The proportion
of British
people
was 7%. The indicators of Chinese
and New Zealand are relatively similar, at 2% for Chinese
and 3% for New Zealanders
. Dutch
people
have the lowest proportion
, with 1%. Other nationalities have a 15% proportion
of the total population
.
According to
the table, 80% of Australians
live in the city
. The figure for British
people
who live in the city
is higher than that, at 89%. The figure for Chinese
is higher than that for New Zealanders
, at 99% for Chinese
and 90% for New Zealanders
. Moreover
, 83% of Dutch
live in the city
. Turning to the countryside population
, Australians
have the largest proportion
, at 20%. The proportions of British
and New Zealanders
are almost similar, at 11% for British
and 10% for New Zealanders
. The figure for Dutch
people
is quite lower than that, with 7%. The lowest proportion
belongs to the Chinese
, at 1%.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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