The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
The pie chart and table compare the different nationalities in Australia in terms of the
proportion
of
population
and areas where they live.
Overall
,
Australians
have the largest
proportion
and the least
proportion
belongs to the
Dutch
.
Additionally
, most
Chinese
live in the
city
and most
people
in
countryside
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are Australian.
According to
the pie chart,
Australians
have the largest
proportion
, representing 77% of the total
population
. The
proportion
of
British
people
was 7%. The indicators of
Chinese
and New Zealand are relatively similar, at 2% for
Chinese
and 3% for New
Zealanders
.
Dutch
people
have the lowest
proportion
, with 1%. Other nationalities have a 15%
proportion
of the total
population
.
According to
the table, 80% of
Australians
live in the
city
. The figure for
British
people
who live in the
city
is higher than that, at 89%. The figure for
Chinese
is higher than that for New
Zealanders
, at 99% for
Chinese
and 90% for New
Zealanders
.
Moreover
, 83% of
Dutch
live in the
city
. Turning to the countryside
population
,
Australians
have the largest
proportion
, at 20%. The proportions of
British
and New
Zealanders
are almost similar, at 11% for
British
and 10% for New
Zealanders
. The figure for
Dutch
people
is quite lower than that, with 7%. The lowest
proportion
belongs to the
Chinese
, at 1%.
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  • demographic data
  • population distribution
  • nationality groups
  • urban planning
  • cultural diversity
  • social policy
  • demographic trends
  • rural vs. urban distribution
  • reflect on the implications
  • cultural exchange
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