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The first chart shows how energy is used in an average australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Make summary by choose and report the main features and compare the charts

The first chart shows how energy is used in an average australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Make summary by choose and report the main features and compare the charts
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The first chart displays the breakdown of
energy
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 usage in an average Australian
household
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,
while
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 the second chart shows the
greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
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 resulting from
this
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energy
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use
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. Heating and
water
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 heating are the main uses of
energy
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 and contribute to a significant proportion of
emissions
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 as by-products of
energy
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consumption
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. Heating is the largest
energy
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 consumer, accounting for 42% of
household
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energy
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use
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,
while
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water
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 heating follows at 30%.
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, when looking at
greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
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,
water
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 heating becomes the largest contributor at 32%, surpassing its
energy
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use
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 proportion. Heating,
on the other hand
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, contributes only 15% to
emissions
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, which is significantly lower than its
energy
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consumption
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 share.
This
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 contrast indicates that
water
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 heating is less efficient in terms of
emissions
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 compared to its
energy
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use
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. For other sectors, refrigeration and lighting
uses
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use
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 7% and 4 % of
household
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energy
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 but
accounts
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account
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 for double
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
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, indicating a higher impact relative to its
energy
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consumption
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. These comparisons reveal that some
household
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 activities
,
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 have a disproportionate impact on
greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
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 compared to their
energy
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consumption
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, household, greenhouse, gas, emissions, use, water, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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