The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .
The graph illustrates
average
carbon dioxide emissions each Correct article usage
the average
person
produced in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, it is evident that while
per-capita carbon dioxide emissions in the UK and Sweden declined, those for Italy and Portugal went up throughout the period.
The UK, whilst being the absolute leader in this
figure, saw a slight drop from just above 10 tonnes
in 1967 to around 9 tonnes
in the last
year. In comparison, Italy had an initial rise from approximately 8 to more than 10 tonnes
in 1977 and then
, dwindled sharply to nearly 7 tonnes
per person
. Subsequently
, it further
plummeted to roughly 6 tonnes
in 2007.
Regarding Italy, it started at 4 tonnes
per person
in 1967. However
, the figure rose to around 7 tonnes
in 1987, outrunning Sweden. It kept going up significantly to almost 8 tonnes
in 1997 per person
and stood at it until 2007. Furthermore
, Portugal, being the least per-capita carbon emitter over these 40 years, witnessed an increment of 2 tonnes
, reaching 4 tonnes
per person
in 1967. The growth continued and reached a peak of 6 tonnes
in 2007.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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