The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .
The graph illustrates
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carbon dioxide emissions each
person
produced in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, it is evident that
while
per-capita carbon dioxide emissions in the UK and Sweden declined, those for Italy and Portugal went up throughout the period. The UK, whilst being the absolute leader in
this
figure, saw a slight drop from just above 10
tonnes
in 1967 to around 9
tonnes
in the
last
year. In comparison, Italy had an initial rise from approximately 8 to more than 10
tonnes
in 1977 and
then
, dwindled sharply to nearly 7
tonnes
per
person
.
Subsequently
, it
further
plummeted to roughly 6
tonnes
in 2007. Regarding Italy, it started at 4
tonnes
per
person
in 1967.
However
, the figure rose to around 7
tonnes
in 1987, outrunning Sweden. It kept going up significantly to almost 8
tonnes
in 1997 per
person
and stood at it until 2007.
Furthermore
, Portugal, being the least per-capita carbon emitter over these 40 years, witnessed an increment of 2
tonnes
, reaching 4
tonnes
per
person
in 1967. The growth continued and reached a peak of 6
tonnes
in 2007.
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