Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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technology

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improvements

has

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becoming

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easier our lifestyle, introducing to our daily basis Modern appliances at

home

. I

am

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abosolutelly

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absolutely

agree with

this

statement when could be mentioned Alexa or

Google

as alternatives for

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intelligent

homes.

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essay will discuss in more detail how

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technology

could contribute

for

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the best in our

life

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. It is important

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enhance

the fact that

through

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time

life

is becoming

stressfull

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stressful

and

overwelming

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overwhelming

because introducing advances in technology makes us feel that our

life

is going faster. For that

reason

, some companies have been developing

diferent

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different

kinds of software using Artificial

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intelligence

(AI) to help to improve our

lifes

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.

For example

,

iPhone

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brings Siri as

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assistan

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assistant

, Amazon - Alexa to help at

home

, and

Google

is a combination in between iPhone and Amazon with extra features that integrate the control of

home

appliances. All of those are able to help

people

to increase their

productivite

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productivity

at their workplace,

allows

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parents to set schedules and help their

offsprings

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to study at

home

.

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,

reduce

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the cost of living in terms of the use

efectivetly

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of

their

appliaces

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applications

setting time to turn the lights on and off, you are able to check remotely if the lights at

home

were

leaving

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on by mistake. For

these

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this reason

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reason

and more that have not been mentioned more and

people

are motivated to acquire

this kinds

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of devices.

On the other hand

, it is well known that

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has

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a backup of every single

life

detail, they record and store them on the

clould

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cloud

. Basically, we are sharing all data, conversations, and

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of

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things since the first moment that we

welcoming

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into our

lifes

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lives

technologic

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friends

such

as Siri, Alexa, and

Google

. The best and

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simple example is the fact when you research

in

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about

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on

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social media or anywhere on your computer, tablet, and smartphone articles related

with

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colours. So if the information

that is

being collected from

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differents

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devices is used with a

non well

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porpuses is where the negative impact will cause damage

on

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peoples

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lifes

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lives

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.

Reason

why some

group

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of

people

are

eceptical

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sceptical

or reluctant to use them. In conclusion, I consider that

technologic

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advances

definetly

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definitely

has

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become our

life

easier,

for

this

reason

I would

recomend

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recommend

to those

people

that have not

enjoying

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the

greates

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greatest

great

things that these

devises

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could do for them to

give

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an

opportinity

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opportunity

and let them

to

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improve their

life

. If still feel

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concern

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in terms of privacy just use them little by

litle

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little

and modify their configuration to the level that as an user you

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feel

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conftable

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comfortable

.