The diagram shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The two maps illustrate how Central Library has changed over 20 years.
Overall
, the library underwent many significant transformations including the relocation and the new establishment. Having looked at the map for more details, one of the most remarkable changes in the map is that the reading
room
on the bottom left has been relocated to behind the computer
room
.
This
moving paves the way for the
room
which contains CDs, videos, and computer games at the top left. In the past, the adult fiction books’ space was on the left centre of the area.
However
, it has been moved to the opposite location.
Moreover
, the children’s book
room
which was on the upper right corner has been moved to the left side. In terms of new construction, the adult fiction book has been upgraded with modernized equipment. Particularly, self-service machines have been added
as well as
an information desk. In the right bottom corner, the enquiry desk has been replaced.
This
replacement allows the construction of a new coffee shop.
Moreover
, in the children’s fiction books area, 2 new sofas have been inserted and there are
also
story-telling events.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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