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This Sunday, we are holding a "Reading challenge" with Ms.Malika at 11:00 a.m. It includes: - review all aspects of reading and tips for improving your reading; - analysis of Reading Passage 2 - test of full reading in real conditions of a Mock.  P.S. It takes place instead of Friday's lessons, which were cancelled. Everyone should participate.

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This
 Sunday, we are holding a "Reading challenge" with Ms.Malika at 11:00 a.m. It includes: - review all aspects of reading and tips for improving your reading; - analysis of Reading Passage 2 - test of full reading in real conditions of a Mock.  P.S. It takes place
instead
 of Friday's lessons, which were cancelled. Everyone should participate.
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introduction conclusion
Try to start your event announcement with an engaging introduction to capture your audience's interest right away.
introduction conclusion
Consider summarizing the main points of the challenge to provide a clear conclusion and remind participants of the key information.
task response
Providing more specific examples about what participants may learn or how the activities will be beneficial can make your message stronger.
task response
The announcement clearly details the time and date of the event, ensuring participants know when to attend.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the message follows a logical order, making it easy for the reader to follow and understand the information.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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