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Self-driving
vehicles
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vehicles
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There are a few benefits of self-driving Use synonyms
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people
who have limited time to do their work. From my experience, when my colleagues had to do a task urgently, they got it done by ordering an online taxi and using the commute time to get it done. With an autonomous vehicle, Use synonyms
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, the probability of incidents is potentially minimized because one of the major causes of Linking Words
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the
tired and unfocused drivers. Correct article usage
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then
it will cause major accidents that will not only affects the Linking Words
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for example
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thus
they will be no longer needed.
All-in-all, there are a few advantages and Linking Words
disadvantages
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disadvantages
. The risk of accidents caused by autonomous cars is still large. Use synonyms
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disadvantages
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further
research and development are done to ensure their safety.Linking Words
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