Top athletes and famous musicians today are paid enormous sums of money, and many people believe that this is unfair and that athletes and musicians should not be paid so much. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is undeniable that stars,
such
as top athletes and musicians are paid substantial sums of money. In fact, many people think that their salaries should be much lower.
On one hand, there are some reasons that are tempting me to support this
statement. Indeed, it is common knowledge that sportsmen and singers are paid way more than other professions
. For example
, many professions
, such
as doctors, engineers or teachers have lower wages. Furthermore
, those professions
are extremely important for economic growth, but since the income
is low, an increasing number of young decide to opt for other jobs. Moreover
, people like construction workers work very hard and often their salaries are not enough to support their families. Thus
, I believe that other professions
shouldn't be neglected in terms of money.
On the other hand
, athletes have a
great strength, willpower, Remove the article
apply
natural
abilities that not everyone has. Correct word choice
and natural
In addition
, singers have a natural talent that distinguishes them from others. Thus
, all of these abilities are often related to how much they are earning. For example
, Cristiano Ronaldo, since he's a better player, his income
is way higher than his colleagues
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colleague's
colleagues'
income
. Furthermore
, many sportsmen, such
as Formula One drivers, put themselves in danger every time they train. The risks are traumas, car accidents, physical injuries and in the worst scenarios, death. Thus
, I believe the income
is higher to compensate for the risk they take.
To conclude
, I believe its
true that athletes and singers earn enormous sums of money but they seem even higher because normal jobs are not paid enough.Replace the word
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it is
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