The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK resident in 1999.
The line chart illustrates the number of people who travelled to and from
the
England, Wales and Scotland in Correct article usage
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twenty-year
period starting in 1979. The bar graph gives information about how many Add an article
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UK
residents
visited the most 5 popular nations in 1999.
Overall
, it is clear that
there was an increase in visits to and from the UK
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a given
while
France was the most favoured by UK
residents
in 1999.
In 1979, two categories of visitors stood nearly at same
level. Add an article
the same
However
, approximately in 7 years the number of residents
who travelled from the UK
steadily rose and outnumbered the number of people travelling to this
country. Both rate
of tourism to and from the Change to a plural noun
rates
UK
experienced a significant growth until 1999.
According to
the bar chart, France was the most popular country visited by UK
residents
in 1999. This
trend was followed by Spain which is
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also
attracted about 10 million citizens. At
contrast, Turkey witnessed the Change preposition
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least
amount of tourists from Correct word choice
lowest
UK
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the UK
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nearly 3 and 4 millions
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million
of
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residents
travelled to Greece and USA
, respectively.Correct article usage
the USA
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