The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart illustrates the proportion of older people between 1940 to 2040 in three countries.
Overall
, the USA, Sweden, and Japan
all will increase in 2024, however
, Japan
will present the highest population. Despite that Japan
witnessed the highest increase in 2024, it was the lowest from 1940 to 2020. The other two states were relatively increasing.
The highest growth older population will go to Japan
with over 25% in 2024, After starting at just 5% in 1940, then
decrease
below 5% between 1960 and 1980, Wrong verb form
decreasing
however
after 2020 the state witnessed a wild fluctuation to present the wildest population in 2024
Despite that, the USA was
the highest growth below 10% in 1940, and it will show the lowest percentage in 2024. Sweden started above 5% in 1940, which steadily increased below 15% between 1980 to 2000 before increasing to just 20% between 2000 to 2020, Verb problem
had
then
it will show a huge increase with just 20% in 2024.Submitted by ko.aladawi2002 on
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