The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
The table illustrates the number of
people
who lived in five each
other’s Change preposition
of each
countries
in 2011.
Overall
, immigrant's first choice
was, to stay in the United Kingdom
, where the highest people
migrated and the Correct quantifier usage
number of people
Polish
was the least preferred country among all five nations.
It is conspicuous that the maximum number of folks were migrated to Germany
from other countires
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countries
were
1,198,000 in 2011 and the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
second
highest was the
United Change preposition
in the
Kingdom
, where 1,037,000 overseas citizens
moved in the same year
. The citizens
of Italy (556,000) were the highest individuals
Correct quantifier usage
number of individuals
moved
Correct pronoun usage
who moved
in
Change preposition
to
Germany
. The Polish
residents
were 550,000 moved in
the Change preposition
to
Unitd
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United
Kingdom
in the same year
. In addition
, the third
spot was of
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for
Spanish
people
, those were 391,000 moved in
Britain.
Probing ahead, the least gents were migrated 6,000 in Change preposition
to
Polish
from other four
countries
. Furthermore
, the second
lowest destination chose
by the Wrong verb form
chosen
citizens
was Italy, where only 196,000 made their residents
. Additionally
, Spanish
was the third
highest choice
of other
Correct article usage
the other
four
countries
, only 861,000 people
were settled their
.
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The table illustrates the number of Replace the word
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citizens
of each other’s countries
were lived in 2011.
Overall
, immigrant’s
first Fix the agreement mistake
immigrants’
choice
was to stay in the United Kingdom
, where the largest people
migrated and
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apply
the
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apply
Polish
was the least preferred country among all five nations and Britain Correct your spelling
Poland
preformed
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performed
also
.
It is conspicuous that the maximumnumber
of folks who migrated Correct your spelling
maximum number
in
Change preposition
to
Germany
from the
other Correct article usage
apply
countires
Correct your spelling
countries
were
1,198,000 in 2011 and the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
second
highest was the
United Change preposition
in the
Kingdom
, where 1,037,000 overseas citizens
moved in the same year
. The citizens
of Italy (556,000) were highest
Correct article usage
the highest
individuals
Correct quantifier usage
number of individuals
moved
Correct pronoun usage
who moved
in
Change preposition
to
Germany
. The Polish
residents
were 550,000 moved in
the Change preposition
to
Unitd
Correct your spelling
United
Kingdom
in the same year
. In addition
, the third
spot was of
Change preposition
for
Spanish
people
, those were 391,000 moved in
Britain.
Probing ahead, the least gents were moved 6,000 in Change preposition
to
Polish
from other four
countries
. Furthermore
, the second
lowest destination chose
by the Wrong verb form
chosen
citizens
was Italy, where only 196,000 made their residents
. Additionally
, Spanish
was the third
highest choice
of other
Correct article usage
the other
four
countries
, only 861,000 people
were settled their
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