Task 1 The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates a survey result of drinking habits and individuals’ tea and
coffee
buying in five different towns in Australia.
Overall
, it can be seen that people who visited
cafes
for tea or
coffee
in
Melbourne
took the highest percentages among the place, where percentages of individuals who bought instant
coffee
became the majority of fresh
coffee
buyers throughout the metropolis in four weeks.
To begin
with,
community
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a community
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who went to
cafes
, there are more than 65% of citizens in
Melbourne
visited
cafes
for tea and
coffee
and became the highest number of visitors among the urban areas quite similar to Hobart which just under
Melbourne
proportion and followed by Sydney in third position, counted just over 60%.
In Addition
, Brisbane showed about 50% of the population regularly visited
cafes
in the
last
four weeks.
Moreover
, as the lowest rate of cafe visitors among the cities, Adelaide cafe visitors just counted less than 50%. Turning to
coffee
buyers, it is counted approximately 55% of
population
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the population
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in Hobart bought instant
coffee
higher more than 10% of
a fresh
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fresh coffee spenders
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coffee
spenders, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide where people who purchase fresh
coffee
are lower than convenient
coffee
, counted quite similar range just below 30%, became the lowest proportion of fresh
coffee
purchase. In line with
this
,
Melbourne
and Sydney took more than 45% of those who bought instant
coffee
,
whereas
fresh
coffee
buyers just presented around 43%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cafes, melbourne with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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