The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changes that occurred each
month
in the prices of three metals in the year 2014.
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Overall
, it is evident that Linking Words
while
the average monthly change rates went up for zinc, those for copper and Linking Words
nickel
declined over the one-year period.
During the first Use synonyms
month
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nickel
was the absolute leader, with the highest change rates at 4-6%. It kept dwindling until May when it reached less than 1%. Zinc, in comparison, saw a 2% increment in the first Use synonyms
month
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then
fell slightly to 1%, outrunning Linking Words
nickel
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the figure for copper Linking Words
also
experienced a downfall, plunging from 2% to well below 0% in January and May respectively.
Moving on to the Linking Words
last
six months, Linking Words
nickel
plummeted to -3%. Meanwhile, copper surged to 1%, where it stood steady until September before rising again to almost 2%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
nickel
first went down steadily to -1%, prior to its fluctuation between -1% and 0%. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, it soared profoundly to a 2% Linking Words
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chance
month
in the Use synonyms
last
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month
, making it the highest percentage.Use synonyms
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