The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changes that occurred each
month
in the prices of three metals in the year 2014.
Overall
, it is evident that while
the average monthly change rates went up for zinc, those for copper and nickel
declined over the one-year period.
During the first month
, nickel
was the absolute leader, with the highest change rates at 4-6%. It kept dwindling until May when it reached less than 1%. Zinc, in comparison, saw a 2% increment in the first month
and then
fell slightly to 1%, outrunning nickel
. Moreover
, the figure for copper also
experienced a downfall, plunging from 2% to well below 0% in January and May respectively.
Moving on to the last
six months, nickel
plummeted to -3%. Meanwhile, copper surged to 1%, where it stood steady until September before rising again to almost 2%. In contrast
, nickel
first went down steadily to -1%, prior to its fluctuation between -1% and 0%. Subsequently
, it soared profoundly to a 2% change
per Correct your spelling
chance
month
in the last
month
, making it the highest percentage.Submitted by bita.rezaei7052 on
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