The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changes that occurred each
month
in the prices of three metals in the year 2014.
Overall
, it is evident that
while
the average monthly change rates went up for zinc, those for copper and
nickel
declined over the one-year period. During the first
month
,
nickel
was the absolute leader, with the highest change rates at 4-6%. It kept dwindling until May when it reached less than 1%. Zinc, in comparison, saw a 2% increment in the first
month
and
then
fell slightly to 1%, outrunning
nickel
.
Moreover
, the figure for copper
also
experienced a downfall, plunging from 2% to well below 0% in January and May respectively. Moving on to the
last
six months,
nickel
plummeted to -3%. Meanwhile, copper surged to 1%, where it stood steady until September before rising again to almost 2%.
In contrast
,
nickel
first went down steadily to -1%, prior to its fluctuation between -1% and 0%.
Subsequently
, it soared profoundly to a 2%
change
Correct your spelling
chance
show examples
per
month
in the
last
month
, making it the highest percentage.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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