The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the changes that occurred each
month
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in the prices of three metals in the year 2014.
Overall
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, it is evident that
while
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the average monthly change rates went up for zinc, those for copper and
nickel
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declined over the one-year period. During the first
month
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,
nickel
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was the absolute leader, with the highest change rates at 4-6%. It kept dwindling until May when it reached less than 1%. Zinc, in comparison, saw a 2% increment in the first
month
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and
then
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fell slightly to 1%, outrunning
nickel
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.
Moreover
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, the figure for copper
also
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experienced a downfall, plunging from 2% to well below 0% in January and May respectively. Moving on to the
last
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six months,
nickel
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plummeted to -3%. Meanwhile, copper surged to 1%, where it stood steady until September before rising again to almost 2%.
In contrast
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,
nickel
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first went down steadily to -1%, prior to its fluctuation between -1% and 0%.
Subsequently
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, it soared profoundly to a 2%
change
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chance
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per
month
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in the
last
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month
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, making it the highest percentage.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words month, nickel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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