You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph
comapres
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compares
the various types of transportation by individuals for work in one European city in three different years,1960,1980 and 2000.
Overall
,
use
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the use
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of every transportation
modes
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mode
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changed over
the
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apply
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time.
To begin
with,
popularity
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the popularity
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of
bus was
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buses
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in 1980 was 20 and
then
increased to the peak position
to
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of
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27 in 1980 and
then
popularity decreased at the lowest position to 17.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • modes of transport
  • public policy
  • urbanization
  • lifestyle changes
  • technological advancements
  • environment
  • city infrastructure
  • popularity
  • comparison
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • data
  • figures
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