The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar graph
comapres
the various types of transportation by individuals for work in one European city in three different years,1960,1980 and 2000.
Correct your spelling
compares
Overall
,Linking Words
use
of every transportation Correct article usage
the use
modes
changed over Fix the agreement mistake
mode
the
time.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with, Linking Words
popularity
of Add an article
the popularity
bus was
in 1980 was 20 and Wrong verb form
buses
then
increased to the peak position Linking Words
to
27 in 1980 and Change preposition
of
then
popularity decreased at the lowest position to 17.Linking Words
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