You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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An illustration depicts the lifespan of one kind of butterfly called Monarch butterfly. The cycle started when the butterfly

move

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moved

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to the north to lay eggs.

This

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happened when two butterflies met, which

will

Verb problem

apply

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consequently

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lead

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led

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produce

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the production of

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a new Monarch butterflies

Correct the article-noun agreement

a new Monarch butterfly

new Monarch butterflies

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. The process

started

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starts

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when the butterflies

mirage

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migrate

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to the

nourth

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north

, to meet and lay

aggs

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eggs

on milkweed,

this

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stage

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called

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is called

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egg

Correct article usage

the egg

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stage

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. After 14 days, the larval

stage

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started when eggs started to

hatched

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hatch

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to make the larval

goes

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out the

egge

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edge

egg

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this

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stage

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caterpillar

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the caterpillar

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started to move in the milkweed, until it

attached

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was attached

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it. The pupal

stage

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startes

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started

starts

after 10 days with

lavral

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larval

labral

beings inside something called chrysalis for 10 days.

Thereafter

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, the adult

apeared

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appeared

from

chrysalis

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the chrysalis

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to have

new

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a new

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Monarch butterfly that

will

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would

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travel to the south and after 6

mounth

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month

months

the process

commences

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would commence

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again.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

141 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Traffic jams are considered one of the major obstacles that face large towns around the world. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this problem and suggest possible solutions that can be implemented to handle it.

Some people spend a lot of money attending cultural or sports events. Is it a good thing or bad thing? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience

Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools, but others think that it has negative effects. Discuss both points of view and give your own oipnion

average daily sales of four products, by numbers of servings

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.