The bar chart below shows the information of the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did frequent physical activity in 2010

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian

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Males

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and

Female

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females

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in different age

of

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apply

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group

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groups

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practicing

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practising

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regular physical activity in

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period 2010. Units are measured in percentage.

Overall

, men were the higher in doing

regular

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a regular

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physical activity

then

it

start

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to decrease to the lowest point,

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, it

bairly

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barely

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increase

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again but not like the first figure,

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,

female

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females

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were lower

then

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men in doing

regular

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the regular

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physical activity than it starts to

increase

and been steady till it drawback again. At first

glence

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glance

, men were higher with 52.8%

then

it fell down to 42.2% and drawback

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39.5%,

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, it starts to

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till it reaches 43.1%,

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, it slightly

increase

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in the two figures with 45.1% and 47%

respectivly

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respectively

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In

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the other hand,

female

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females

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were lower

with

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47.7%

then

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to

increase

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48.9%,

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rise

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again

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52.5% reaching

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peak

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53%,

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53% and

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after that it fell down with 47.1% to be near with the proportion of male.